Alchymical Romance [Serial Killer Remix]

by Grant Watson
 

 
He loved her even in those moments. It meant more. If only-

Now she was gone. The only empty chair. Gone. He stared over his window.

No way. He couldn’t. Too long criss-crossing the skin. Unnoticed. Undisturbed. A shark. Barely noticed. Pure solitude.

 A tunnel of outstretched fingers. A ghost of dust in the dead air. A gutted shell, broken bit by bit, bare bones. Nothing had been spared, dumping everything, arm jerking spasmodically, head twitched. Nothing penetrates the torso.

He gazed steadily out the window. Some key to understanding. This is important. Only with it could he begin.

Seven months. Twenty one. Problems, problems, problems. You all come.

Sorry?

No.

No. I guess not.

Creative Commons License 

The Serial Killer Remix by Grant Watson is licensed under a CC Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike 2.5 Australia licence. It is a derivative work of Lee Battersby’s CC Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike 2.5 Australia licensed story. The original is available at http://www.remixmylit.com/storiesremixes/alchymical-romance-by-lee-battersby/. For details on how you can reuse the original and this remix see http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/2.5/au/ 

 

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That is an awesome remix. I couldn’t help but feel Battersby’s love for the series ‘Dexter’ peeking through in the original story–looks like you have felt the same vibe :)

sajbrfem added these pithy words on Oct 29 08 at 2:29 pm

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